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Empatheias Events ([personal profile] empevents) wrote in [community profile] empatheias_ooc2016-05-14 02:08 pm
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HMD: May

— HMD: MAY—


All right guys, time fora nother gamewide HMD. Exact same as last time, so here are a few things you should know as well as the rules and guidelines to how to participate in this HMD.

  • Optional. This is not a mandatory HMD. You do not have to participate, however we highly encourage those who have questions or want tips to comment.
  • Public + Optional Anon + IP Logging On. This is open to the public, so those outside of the game can give critique. There is no requirement to join the community. Anonymous commenting is turned on however IP logging remains on and players can say whether they want anonymous comments or not. If a player has requested only logged-in critique, please respect their wishes. Not everyone is comfortable with anonymous.
  • Those giving crit: be polite and constructive. This HMD is to help players improve their playing and thereby improve the experience of everyone. It is also to help players point out things that might be questionable. Sometimes there are legitimate reasons for it, and sometimes it's a misinterpretation or clear mistake. Regardless, your crit should be helping the other player see their mistake and/or offer ways to help improve. You can be frank, you can be blunt, but you should not be disrespectful. Crit can be a hard pill to swallow, and while you shouldn't have to sugarcoat it, you can try to make it more palatable. In addition, try to provide actual examples of what you're talking about. It will help facilitate the discussion and give a better idea of your point.
  • Those receiving crit: be open-minded and receptive. Receiving critique can be very difficult, but if you're participating in this HMD, then that must mean you are prepared for that possibility. If you receive critique that doesn't make sense, do not be defensive. Instead ask questions and try to clear up misunderstandings. In addition, be open to what people have to say. Sometimes we have blinders on when playing our characters and may not see problems that others do. Be willing to compromise as well. Maybe you don't agree with everything that is said, but there could be helpful nuggets in there. If there are things you are specifically worried about, you should include it in your comment. This could help others help you.
  • Going Anon. If a player has opted for anonymous critique, it should be written no different than if you were giving it while logged in. All of the above rules apply. Basically think of it this way: if you wouldn't say it while logged in, then don't say it anon. The only real reason to allow anonymous here is to help those who want to give meaningful crit, but are shy or afraid for whatever reason. It is not to be abused.
  • Monitoring. We will be monitoring this post, and if any harassment is found, it will be immediately screened and frozen. Any repeat offenders will be banned. Any anonymous abuse will result in anonymous turned off. If there is anything to report, contact us.

If you understand how this HMD works, fill out the appropriate form and comment to this post. The questions should help players have some structure and formulate how and what to write what they want.


RECEIVING CRIT:
Player:
Character(s):
Personal HMD? If you have a personal HMD, you can link to that as well.
Anon allowed? Yes or No
Concerns: Any concerns you have that you'd like others to try and help you with. Is there something about your characterization that you feel off? Do you wish to improve your writing? Do you need tips how to be more engaging?
Anything else: Anything else you'd like to mention, such as any notes about the character or canon material that you feel others should be aware of. For example, if your character is from one version and not another and how that might affect characterization.




The mod/game critique thread can be found here.
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[personal profile] simpathis 2016-05-14 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Mods
Character(s): NPCs + Game
Personal HMD? Not quite, but there is the Confidential Contact.
Anon allowed? Yes.

Concerns: Feedback on anything, especially past and future events would be great. If there has ever been anything bugging you about either how we've been running the game or anything at all about what we do, please let us know! We're always looking for ways to improve the game, and as mods, we really value and appreciate feedback. And remember, we won't know something is wrong if you don't tell us.

Anything else: Just anything else you'd like to suggest or would like to see in the future!
Edited 2016-05-14 19:13 (UTC)

(Anonymous) 2016-05-16 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
After being in the game for a while I've noticed a trend in the (collective) mods' actions that has concerned me. I feel like there's an unwelcoming feeling towards new players during application time. For the past few rounds there have been multiple public comments in the mod run plurk (and other public spaces but that's not as important as the specific app/reserve plurk) complaining about the amount of apps. Even if these are meant to be said jokingly the tone can be easily lost when they are repeated over and over. While I know mod work can be stressful and even annoying to see this stated right to the face of potential applicants is discouraging. There's more leeway in personal plurks but seeing this in Empatheias' official mod plurk is something I consider unacceptable. It gives off an impression like "wow, would it be better if I just delete my app right now then?"

I'm not saying that new players aren't accepted by old players or that there is no tag outs on the ic intro. Emp is actually a very welcoming game! I'm simply saying the ooc welcome could use some work.

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[personal profile] lalliho 2016-05-14 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Otis
Character(s): Lalli Hotakainen ([personal profile] lalliho)
Personal HMD? Over here!
Anon allowed? Yes!
Concerns: What aren't I concerned about, tbh...
Anything else:
Anything at all that you can offer me, I will gladly accept! I'm always up for improvement and bettering the experience for all you guys, too!
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[personal profile] seriff 2016-05-14 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: skarme
Character(s): Alphonse Elric | Fullmetal Alchemist | [personal profile] unerasable, Sans | Undertale | [personal profile] seriff
Personal HMD? One for each, Al and Sans (both anon-enabled and initially screened).
Anon allowed? Y!
Concerns: I have had pretty bad problems with tagging consistently, in part because of health stuff I'm technically hiatused for right now, so I'm open to feedback on whether that's tenable for current CR or something I should work on first, and also whether character voice when I do get to tag ends up suffering for it. Crit on pretty much anything else is welcome too, though!
Anything else: As ever, Alphonse is the 2003 anime's extra codependent version of Alphonse and Sans is a No Mercy version of Sans, because I like to make canonmates' lives difficult.
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[personal profile] angelofnaboo 2016-05-14 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Mako
Character(s): Padmé Amidala [personal profile] angelofnaboo, Lloyd Irving [personal profile] boredalready, Sonia Nevermind [personal profile] properprincess
Personal HMD? Padmé, Lloyd, Sonia
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: Sonia is still settling in, so I haven't been quite as active as I should be with her. I also know that I've been slow this month because of health issues. Anything else that you can think of would be great.
Anything else: Nothing I can think of.
intohell: (bh-1)

[personal profile] intohell 2016-05-14 07:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Kat
Character(s): Riza Hawkeye ([personal profile] intohell) and Misaki Kirihara ([personal profile] protecttheweak)
Personal HMD? Riza and Misaki
Anon allowed? Sure, but if you want a reply on anything at least use a sock
Concerns: My tagging times doesn't match up with a lot of people so I know I end up being a slower tagger at times--sorry about that.
Anything else: I'm open to any suggestions, comments, or questions regarding my characters. Ask away!
spiritofjustice: Please don't take without permission! (And I want you dead)

[personal profile] spiritofjustice 2016-05-14 07:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Meowzy
Character(s): Bobby Fulbright [personal profile] spiritofjustice | Sherlock Holmes [personal profile] greatestdefective
Personal HMD? Here
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: Nothing's coming to mind.
Anything else: I'll take feedback on literally anything!
creativenonfiction: (7:10 am fuck me in the ass)

[personal profile] creativenonfiction 2016-05-14 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Greer!
Character(s): Kunikida Doppo
Personal HMD? it's on his journal. I'm on the phone so I can't link. I'm sorry!!
Anon allowed? Yes!
Concerns: I only just started playing him about two months ago and the canon is still updating so it's kind of hard to feel secure in his voice! I feel like I have a lot of difficulty with his way of speech, although I worry I'm not balancing his personality right either! If anyone canon-familiar or not has thoughts on that please let me know!
Anything else: as a heads-up I'm on my phone right now so replies might be delayed! Also random icon please don't give me an angry one.
Edited (it gave me an angry one) 2016-05-14 22:06 (UTC)
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[personal profile] chronosynthesis 2016-05-14 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Athuria
Character(s): Syrlya
Personal HMD? Doop
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: Nothing immediately tbh.
Anything else: \o/
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[personal profile] becomeashield 2016-05-14 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Kiri
Character(s): Zeno | Akatsuki no Yona ([personal profile] becomeashield)
Personal HMD? here
Anon allowed? Sure
Concerns: I've been quite slow answering lately due to lack of inspiration, and I need to reconnect with old, non-castmate CR, and make shiny new CR. My bracket descriptions might be a bit bleh, too. Anyone who knows the canon, let me know if Zeno's voice been off at some point. He's become more communicative (to an extend) in the year he's been at Emp, so there's that.
Anything else: Nope! Anything goes.
Edited (I can't close a parenthesis...) 2016-05-14 19:41 (UTC)
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[personal profile] ohrlyeh 2016-05-14 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Crystal
Character(s): H.P. Lovecraft | [personal profile] ohrlyeh
Personal HMD? Right over here!
Anon allowed? Yes!
Concerns: Is he engaging? I worry that people are turned off by his general dreariness, passiveness, and unexciting dialogue, and I've been doing my best to make threading with him as fun as possible without making him OOC.
Anything else: I'm totally up for any crit anyone may have, I'm always up for improving Lovecraft to be better to play with!
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[personal profile] lalliho 2016-05-14 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
AS ANOTHER "oh god why can't you talk like a person"...person, I have to say that I really enjoy what you do with him! He's got a good amount of dreary that you can hear a slow, listless tone, but it's still a hook. You throw in weird shenanigans and crank up the creep/mystery factor at the right moments to keep things nice and interesting.

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[personal profile] lostapprentice 2016-05-14 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Ryoko
Character(s): Bucky Barnes [personal profile] heismymission, Freya Crescent [personal profile] dragoncrest, Kylo Ren [personal profile] lostapprentice
Personal HMD? Beep boop bop
Anon allowed? Ye
Concerns: idk you tell me
Anything else:
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Edited 2016-05-14 21:43 (UTC)
thejusticewagon: fuck yeah!! (AND DESPAIR!)

[personal profile] thejusticewagon 2016-05-14 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Ran
Character(s): Cynthia | Fire Emblem: Awakening ([personal profile] thejusticewagon)
Personal HMD? HERE IT IS
Anon allowed? Absolutely!
Concerns: I've been kinda slow, but I'm hoping to pick things up a bit.
Anything else: Uhhh she's Chrom flavor, which doesn't really affect much except maybe that she's even more of a goofball airhead.
Edited 2016-05-14 19:33 (UTC)
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[personal profile] hopedout 2016-05-14 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Len
Character(s): Hajime Hinata
Personal HMD? Here.
Anon allowed? Yes.
Concerns: I know that I've been missing for the last few months due to the fact that I was heavily involved in a murder game, but now that I'm back, my activity should be alright. Of course, I'm pretty concerned about literally everything, considering that Hinata Hajime is a protagonist of a very well known series. I'm primarily concerned about his development, especially considering that he's been in game for about five months. But anything else is fine!
Anything else: Mostly what I said above, but if there's anything else that you'd like to bring up with me, please let me know! I'd appreciate any pointers for improvement, or anything you'd like to tell me that I'm doing right so I can keep that in his characterization, etcetera.
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[personal profile] luxuriant 2016-05-14 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Ash
Character(s): Dhaveiras Lavellan, Zelos Wilder
Personal HMD? On their journals!
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: I am very aware of my lack of activity with the inquisitor and I'm sorry!! I'm considering things to fix this, so any crit for both characters aside from this would be great, particularly Zelos!
Anything else: I mentioned in a recent ooc post why I've been choosy with tags and slow since Monday, sorry about that!
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[personal profile] oratorical 2016-05-14 07:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Jordan
Character(s): Leia Organa ([personal profile] oratorical)
Personal HMD? here
Anon allowed? Yep
Concerns: Well mostly my concerns are related to having never played a star war before now, so I'm not totally like 100% sure of my characterization, not anything more specific than that. That and I know I need to find some time to throw her at people that aren't actually castmates sometime.
Anything else: nope!
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[personal profile] urbaninja 2016-05-14 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
b>Player: Megan
Character(s): Roxas | [personal profile] seasaltkey | Kingdom Hearts
Agent North Dakota | < user name=brodakota> | Red vs Blue
Personal HMD? Here and Here
Anon allowed? If you have to
Concerns: Things got kind of crazy at the end of last month/beginning of this month, as I got a new job and had to move and all the fun adjustments that come with starting that and living on your own for the first time. Kind of slowed everything down and I'm still settling into things and refiguring out my direction for these guys.
Anything else: Improvements and suggestions always welcome.
despiteeverything: from "The Dogs of Future Past pt. 6" (hairruffles)

[personal profile] despiteeverything 2016-05-14 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Gorse
Character(s): Frisk [personal profile] despiteeverything
Personal HMD? Yup
Anon allowed? Y
Concerns: Worried about reaching out enough for cross-canon CR. I know I'm doing a lot better than I was my first two months but given Frisk's IC position, I want to make sure I'm doing this right. Also worried about making engaging enough prompts (and responses but especially prompts) but that's a constant worry of mine. Other worries include tagging speed + consistencies but those are pretty universal too.
Anything else: Was sick last week and the remnants of it + full time work have been fucking me over focus-wise. Sorry for my relative absence in that regard + probably a lot of cherrypicking
Edited 2016-05-14 19:43 (UTC)
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[personal profile] workingon3 2016-05-14 07:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Denise
Character(s): John Laurens
Personal HMD? Also serves as an opt out post.
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: That maybe I'm like, obnoxious? I feel like I alternate between TAGGING ALL OVER THE PLACE and not tagging anyone at all, out of fear they don't want a suicidal historical figure messing up their make believe fun times. Or also that I dwell too much on certain aspects of his character to the point of veering into ooc? Idk I have a lot of concerns help me be less bad.
Anything else: I DO HAVE THAT POST FOR OPTING OUT, if I ever tag you and you don't want this hot mess, I will not be upset AT. ALL. if you ask me not to. I understand that many people might not want to play with a character like John and that's fine y'all.
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[personal profile] greatcleavage 2016-05-14 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Dragon
Character(s): Roy Greenhilt, Princess Celestia, Klavier Gavin, Wrath, Maridian
Personal HMD? Some of my characters have ones on their journals.
Anon allowed? No thank you
Concerns: I remain a failure at the emotion tracker.
Anything else: I'll take any comments you have!
sobored: (What a Hopeless Conversation)

[personal profile] sobored 2016-05-14 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Steve
Character(s): Junko Enoshima ([personal profile] sobored)
Personal HMD? Here!
Anon allowed? Yup!
Concerns: I don't think I have any major concerns right now.
Anything else: I can't think of anything to put here either. If you guys have any crit or suggestions for me, feel free to throw them at me!

[personal profile] litcircle 2016-05-14 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: beans
Character(s): Dazai Osamu
Personal HMD? Here!
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: Still a very new voice and so tell me any and all concerns. pls.
Anything else: linking opt out post because I need to spam it around more.
captainscruffy: insomniatic (BELLOWS LOUDLY)

[personal profile] captainscruffy 2016-05-14 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: mono
Character(s): han solo (this account), franken stein ([personal profile] screwmeister)
Personal HMD? there is one on stein's journal, i don't think there is on han's. :B
Anon allowed? sure
Concerns: i'm never sure what to put here uhhh. i haven't done much with stein yet since he's new so there's that i guess.
Anything else: ehhh stein is from the anime which makes a difference in his character. not that i've done enough with him for anyone to wonder about it probably
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[personal profile] norabbits 2016-05-15 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Just wanted to take a moment to tell you that your Han is fantastic. I can defiantly hear his voice in my head when I'm reading his tags. Also, I adore his conversations with Pepper.
hadthehighground: (Thought provoking)

[personal profile] hadthehighground 2016-05-14 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Darkfeather
Character(s): Obi-Wan Kenobi
Personal HMD? There's one in his journal if you'd rather use that.
Anon allowed? If you have to I guess? Just be nice please.
Concerns: I'm trying to branch him out beyond his canon cast but I dunno I feel awkward about it when I do? I also feel like I might be making him too boring or too sad sometimes. That I'm also not doing the best job with the sass part of him. Thoughts?
Anything else: Comment about anything?
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[personal profile] thefirstbloom 2016-05-14 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: Keely
Character(s): Trahearne | Dorian
Personal HMD? For the tree, Dorian doesn't have one yet so drop it there!
Anon allowed? Yes
Concerns: I know I'm terribly slow already, but I'm working on it the best I can! I'm still worried about... everything... so let me know.
Anything else: TRAHEARNE'S ABS ARE REAL
unglorious: (Truly it is a mystery.)

[personal profile] unglorious 2016-05-14 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Player: AF
Character(s):
-Papyrus | Undertale | [personal profile] spagheleton
-Astor | Fire Emblem 6 | [personal profile] unglorious
Personal HMD? Over here, anon on, IP logging off, screened
Anon allowed? Come at me, bro.
Concerns: I am aware that my activity can be spotty at times, but unfortunately, this is not something I can really fix? My job can be pretty tiring and Papyrus in particular takes a lot of energy to play and that energy is just. Not always there. So feel free to bring up my activity if you feel it's a major issue, but please keep in mind that there's not a whole lot I can do about that? I don't think I have any other concerns about my own play. :|a
Anything else: This feels like a good time to reiterate that Astor is an alcoholic and if you would rather not deal with that particular subject, his permissions post is screened. :|b

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